UPDATE: I changed some dialogue in the first 3 pages and I hopefully fixed all the spelling error. I guess its not really a rough draft anymore...
I wrote this for my screenwriting class. The reason it's a "rough draft" is because I haven't really looked over it completely. My mom read it multiple times though so the grammar and stuff is probably okay. I'm planning on refining it soon.
If for some cosmic reason you've happened upon this and have time to read it please let me know what you think in the comments below.
Andrew Gleason's Updated Short Film Script