Saturday, August 13, 2011

Episode Nine Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I just got one more episode left and I think I've got it all figured out. Season 3 is almost over!

Webseries Season 3 Episode 9

Thursday, August 11, 2011

Episode Eight Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I'm a little unsure about this episode. Also as I get closer to the end of this season I keep getting more and more unsure of how it's gonna end. I want to have a really great ending like Season 2 but I can't figure out how to do it. I want to show the war between the Anders and the humans but I think it'd be better to focus on smaller scale stuff since this is a webseries. Hopefully as I begin writing the next episode I'll start getting ideas for how I should end it.

Let me know if the chase scene is too confusing in the comments below. I feel like I rushed through it a little.

Webseries Season 3 Episode 8

Friday, August 5, 2011

A Mini-Episode of My Webseries

This mini-episode takes place after Smolder rescues Scullery from Felix Callkadawn but before they met Hideo Mazda. I'm gonna have to go back and change some stuff in that episode so if makes a little more sense so yeah... I hope you like it! [})

For anyone who doesn't know, Alan is a talking shoe box.

Webseries Mini-episode 1

Thursday, August 4, 2011

Episode Seven Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I'm gonna hold off on the fight scene with Alan at the beginning for now. I need to think more about it before I try to write it. This episode's direction changed a lot as I wrote it and it ended up mostly just dialogue. It seems apporiate since the fight scene with Alan will probably be expensive. (I basically made the rest of the episode a bottle episode.) Let me know what you think of the dialogue. Was it convincing and natural? If any specific lines, during the whole Scullery/Smolder conversation, stood out as really exceptioanlly to you please point them out to me in the comments. I tried hard to mix in subtext and emotion in the dialogue. I've never written anything quite like it and it made me feel really vulnerable. I hope you like it... whoever you are... just kidding! I know it's you Ryanne! Thanks for being awesome! [})

Webseries Season 3 Episode 7

Saturday, July 30, 2011

Episode Five & Six Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFTS

They're both pretty rough but episode six is really rough and I need to know if it's hard to understand what's going on in it. Let me know what you think in the comments below.

Webseries Season 3 Episode 5

Webseries Season 3 Episode 6

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Episode Four Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

Webseries Season 3 Episode 4

Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Episode Three Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

This episode is probably the worst episode of my entire webseries so don't be afraid to criticize the crap out of it. It'll probably change the most when I eventually rewrite the entire enchilada. Webseries Season 3 Episode 3

Monday, April 11, 2011

Episode Two Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

My brother helped me write this episode.

Webseries Season 3 Episode 2

Thursday, April 7, 2011

A Season Three Sidestory ROUGH DRAFT

Title: Hide and Seek or: How I Learned the Enemy's Secret Plans
Webseries Season 3 Off Shoot

Friday, March 25, 2011

Episode One Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I'm a little unsure of this episode since it's mostly just dialogue. Also I feel like I might not of handled the "aftermath" of Drake's death very well. I'm planning on dealing with it more later so yeah...

Webseries Season 3 Episode 1

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Episode Ten Of The 2nd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

Season Finale

This script is rougher then most of the other rough drafts I've posted on my blog. I just wanted to get it written and posted so that I could get some feedback. The fight scene at the end will probably end up being longer... if you think its fine the way it is please let me know in the comments below.

Webseries Season 2 Episode 10

Friday, March 18, 2011

Episode Nine Of The 2nd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

Webseries Season 2 Episode 9