Saturday, August 13, 2011

Episode Nine Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I just got one more episode left and I think I've got it all figured out. Season 3 is almost over!

Webseries Season 3 Episode 9

Thursday, August 11, 2011

Episode Eight Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I'm a little unsure about this episode. Also as I get closer to the end of this season I keep getting more and more unsure of how it's gonna end. I want to have a really great ending like Season 2 but I can't figure out how to do it. I want to show the war between the Anders and the humans but I think it'd be better to focus on smaller scale stuff since this is a webseries. Hopefully as I begin writing the next episode I'll start getting ideas for how I should end it.

Let me know if the chase scene is too confusing in the comments below. I feel like I rushed through it a little.

Webseries Season 3 Episode 8

Friday, August 5, 2011

A Mini-Episode of My Webseries

This mini-episode takes place after Smolder rescues Scullery from Felix Callkadawn but before they met Hideo Mazda. I'm gonna have to go back and change some stuff in that episode so if makes a little more sense so yeah... I hope you like it! [})

For anyone who doesn't know, Alan is a talking shoe box.

Webseries Mini-episode 1

Thursday, August 4, 2011

Episode Seven Of The 3rd Season of My Webseries: ROUGH DRAFT

I'm gonna hold off on the fight scene with Alan at the beginning for now. I need to think more about it before I try to write it. This episode's direction changed a lot as I wrote it and it ended up mostly just dialogue. It seems apporiate since the fight scene with Alan will probably be expensive. (I basically made the rest of the episode a bottle episode.) Let me know what you think of the dialogue. Was it convincing and natural? If any specific lines, during the whole Scullery/Smolder conversation, stood out as really exceptioanlly to you please point them out to me in the comments. I tried hard to mix in subtext and emotion in the dialogue. I've never written anything quite like it and it made me feel really vulnerable. I hope you like it... whoever you are... just kidding! I know it's you Ryanne! Thanks for being awesome! [})

Webseries Season 3 Episode 7